Ticket Master Mr. Kari King

Bold n’ beautiful Mr. Kari was
Emerging from his abysmal sleep, yawn!
Agape, he sat, darn it was three, and cloudy too
Unswerving routine that he has had, for years now
To the loo, and then, when, who?
Yet time till four, the arrival of the rail engine

Boohoo, and the ever long list
Egregiously beckoning him, oh la-di-da-da,
Yip yip he sipped his usual dark coffee
Out and about, wearing his black coat
Nonetheless, his white collar tie too, mind it please.
Doing his thing, waiting for the four-o-clock train,

Dull and quiet the afternoon was,
Reverberating the siesta town the train roared in,
Every man’s dream, a quiet afternoon’s sleep
And Mr. Kari with his ticket-check list,
Moved through the compartments of the 80’s beast,
Seasons and trains, and of ticket master Mr. Kari King.

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My contribution to Jingle’s Poets Rally Week 34

31 responses to “Ticket Master Mr. Kari King”

  1. Jingle Avatar
    Jingle

    beauty beyond dreams…

    wow,
    what an apt piece,
    I am tickled that you share it with poets rally.

  2. jargnar Avatar

    thank you jingle :)
    glad you like it.

    to poems that make a better world eh ;)
    have a nice day.

  3. lynnaima Avatar

    An “acrostiche” sacre bleu mais ca fait longtemps que j’ai pas lu pareil1 LOL
    It has been awhile since I have read such poetic form and the way you did it…wow! NICEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE, NICELY DONE
    Kudos!
    And thanks for the visit :)

  4. jargnar Avatar

    Lol :P
    yeah yeah thank youuuuuuuuuu. ( for the many e’s in the nice ;) )

    sure, will visit regularly now :P

  5. Olivia Avatar

    hmmm..
    why don’t you color the 1st alphabet differently..?

    Fun read.. :) Happy Rally
    Love xx

    1. jargnar Avatar

      should have done that long back :(
      oh well, :)
      ty :P

  6. ladynimue Avatar

    wow ! you wrote a stunning acrostic even if you did not attempted in that sense !! And i completely enjoyed the scene ..

    1. jargnar Avatar

      Thank you very very much :)

  7. Neha Avatar

    Beauty Beyond Dreams – Absolutely Brilliant!!

    1. jargnar Avatar

      thanks a lot :P :)

  8. Anita Wakeham (Aquarius63) Avatar

    An interesting tale of the ticket master. I enjoyed reading.

    Anita.

    http://anitaspoetry.blogspot.com/2010/12/yet-to-be.html

    1. jargnar Avatar

      thank you! :)

  9. RiikaInfinityy 마왕 Avatar

    I am mesmerized…by your words! =D Happy Rally^^

    1. jargnar Avatar

      flattering :)
      thanks much :)

  10. Chinmay Hegde Avatar

    Crafty piece! well done :)

    1. jargnar Avatar

      thanks!

  11. Fyodor Lewis Avatar

    Very, very interesting poem. I like the form. It sort of burrows into your brain and stays there.
    Great job.

    1. jargnar Avatar

      ha :) i know what you mean :)
      thanks!

  12. iBeingMe Avatar

    Thanks for such a master piece :-)

    1. jargnar Avatar

      Thank YOU :)

  13. Anita Wakeham Avatar
    Anita Wakeham

    To add to my earlier comment “Beauty Beyond Dreams” Cleverly done and an enchanting quote.

    Anita.

    1. jargnar Avatar

      kind of you :)

  14. liv2write2day Avatar

    Wonderfully executed acrostic. You threw me right into a day in his life.

    1. jargnar Avatar

      Thank you!! :)

  15. ashbeezone Avatar

    Very beautiful imagination..
    Take a look on my poetry..
    http://ashbeezone.wordpress.com/2010/11/25/depths-of-my-heart

    1. jargnar Avatar

      :)

  16. Té Avatar

    Snazzy stuffy. Could totally visual Mr. Kari’s exploits in my mind.

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